The critique I feel was a success and I personally got to see what my piece needed and what worked in my piece. After looking at my piece with a audience I now see that it needs more work with shades of darks and lights to make it have a little more depth. Also what works in my piece is all the detailed line work that i have through out it.

This is my second proof. Its handled a bit more giving it a little more depth.

This is my first proof

The first layer will have a spit bite aquatint that will give the piece a little more depth and a overall completed feeling

(PRINT IN PROGRESS)
This is my second plate of the three plates and this one will consist of just the engine parts etched in a grayish tone.

(PRINT IN PROGRESS)
This is the top plate out of a three plate print. This plate will only have the wires and tubing etched in one color.

Work in progress